Please, get better at text haha!
Bad text can ruin an amazing tag. Try not to use bubbly or bold fonts, especially on this type of tag. Instead, use something that's lean and petite, that's not to arrogant and has style.
Now for the sig: I don't really like the negative space you employed. It doesn't fit. When I look at the tag, I feel restricted and without free space, unless that was your intention.
Link's right. You should make your lighting much more vibrant, use a plethora of like colors to make it happen. Evangeline Lilly is lovely.