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09-28-2006
| | | I'm a Saint.
Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Where America goes to die. Fav 360 Game: None. Posts: 2,102
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Project for school (I'm acctually at school right now >.>) But I need opinions from people other then the ones in the class. 
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09-28-2006
| | | Shakin' muh bum
Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: tx. Posts: 808
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Nice. The only part I don't like is where it says" want to get signed..." It is kinda hard to read that. If you resized the text and put it in that little box where all the text is, then it would look awesome. | |
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09-28-2006
| | | shitFire
Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Florida Posts: 1,241
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Pretty good
My only suggestion is on the left..the text is a little hard to read | |
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09-28-2006
| | | Ya DoNe SoN!
Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Ohio near Cleveland Fav 360 Game: GoW, Rock Band, Battlefield: BC, Star Wars: Force Unleashed, MK vs DC Posts: 7,332
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Basically the only flaw is what bacon said. Just make the text a little bigger and maybe change up the color so its easier to read. But other than that it looks really good man.
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09-28-2006
| | | The Sexiest Canadian
Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Canada ;) Posts: 46
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Too busy for a magazine cover, tone down the backround, and put the text in easier to read places, more focused areas. The text seems strewn about at random. The picture of the guy is really low quality stuff, could be fixed.
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09-28-2006
| | | I'm a Saint.
Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Where America goes to die. Fav 360 Game: None. Posts: 2,102
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Originally Posted by Furiosa Too busy for a magazine cover, tone down the backround, and put the text in easier to read places, more focused areas. The text seems strewn about at random. The picture of the guy is really low quality stuff, could be fixed.
Fur | That guy would be me  We have to use a picture of ourselfs, or a picture we took. I will definetly fix the text, and the background might look better if I desaturted it.
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09-28-2006
| | | XsV Returns '08
Join Date: Apr 2006 Fav 360 Game: Gears of War Posts: 3,458
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Nice man. I like it, but it's not magazine covery enough yet.
You've struck a nice balance throughout the whole cover, but the more popular magazines I notice, either catch your attention with the picture or with the text.
You just need a little more contrast, either by cleaning up the BG a little, or by making the text really stand out. Depends how serious you want to make this school project.
Looks good!
P.S. I've never seen a UPC with that many numbers in it, lol 
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09-28-2006
| | | Ya DoNe SoN!
Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Ohio near Cleveland Fav 360 Game: GoW, Rock Band, Battlefield: BC, Star Wars: Force Unleashed, MK vs DC Posts: 7,332
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Originally Posted by Furiosa Too busy for a magazine cover, tone down the backround, and put the text in easier to read places, more focused areas. The text seems strewn about at random. The picture of the guy is really low quality stuff, could be fixed.
Fur | IDK maybe its good that its busy. I mean whatever you can do to make the cover catch your eye because we all know a mag sells by its cover. IDK i personally think it looks fine just fix the text like you said you where going to do on the left there.
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09-28-2006
| | | The Sexiest Canadian
Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Canada ;) Posts: 46
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Originally Posted by Example That guy would be me We have to use a picture of ourselfs, or a picture we took. I will definetly fix the text, and the background might look better if I desaturted it. | The thing i would do first would be get less white in the backroud. A nice contrast from the picture of you.
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09-28-2006
| | | Black on Black
Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: Black on Black Bentley Fav 360 Game: We Call it Phantom of the Opera Posts: 1,680
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Originally Posted by Example Project for school (I'm acctually at school right now >.>) But I need opinions from people other then the ones in the class. | Pretty much the only thing bothering me is the text on the left, its hard to read. But other that that very nice work and the shadowing you did of im assuming yourself is very very well done. Nice work.
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