gmanfaulk

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This is my preview for my upcoming montage in May. I am not worried so much about getting good content as I have at least 30 clips already, I'm looking more for taking a long time to edit the hell out of the montage and make it perfect.

Please give me some critiques, the editing was basic in this montage but very tasteful.


Happy 'taging and happy playing.

-Gmanfaulk

Mofogo

hmm...not bad gameplay but I think for a trailer you should've mixed in more editing to make the trailer not seem like a really short montage. It was like you had an intro (good for a montage) then 2 clips of gameplay. I'm not trying to be an ass, just giving a little suggestion.

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gmanfaulk

no I understand I love to hear what can be done better, I tried to make the text as interesting as possible and the 4 clips I put in I wanted to be short and sweet.

_shiZy_

lol try to get better at editing pleas eor get a editor

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gmanfaulk

If my editing is better than the last montages editing I'm doing better, and thats what I'm going for. The first 25 seconds of text in the beginning is due to your prior comment last montage so I know I at least improved on something. Continual incremental improvement will make each montage better do you agree?

_shiZy_

you didnt improve on anything .. like the resolution is wrong size ... why would u slow down a clip .. why would you put two clips in ... watch some tuts ... downloads fonts ... thank you

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FIF3

And we all wonder why no one sticks around here!

But seriously I agree with mofo, I think a bit more gameplay could have been used, something that makes me look forward to it, ya know?

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Mofogo

geez shiz give him a break. the point is he is trying. sure trying doesn't make shit a magical montage, but it does yield improvement, and if you got an editor for everything then you would never learn how to do shit for yourself.

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F3AR ChaRLie

Looking forward to the finished product man! The two c4 kills at the end where awesome ha ha .

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Two Bit Tmoney

intro is a lot better from last time. but the only thing lacking is the not enough gameplay which was already stated...good job.

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