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03-09-2008
| | | Big Ole Black Nine
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It's okay. There's no real flow and the composition isn't that great. Not feeling it. The white thing coming off of his shoulder ruins it for me. Try to go for a cleaner look next time.
I would try to find some LP tutorials or talk to someone who does them regularly. They can help you alot more than me. | |
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03-09-2008
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The bottom right and the top left don't have the same type of flow. I agree that whatever is on his shoulder has to go, it's too Jaged for the rest of this piece.
I say make the rest of the tag more like the bottom right and it would look great. Color wise it is perfect, lighting is good. Just need to work on your flow. Welcome to the world of LPs, keep them up and you'll never want to go back to sigs.
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03-09-2008
| | | Fuckin hustler kamikaze
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I like it...no real criticism since I don't really know much about this stuff...but I like it.
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Lens flare throws it off for me but ain't bad | |
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I see no lense flare lol. I think you just meant the lighting is too bright. I was going to say that too, but the rest of the image works with it so I didn't really mind.
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03-09-2008
| | | Big Ole Black Nine
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Originally Posted by Brok3nMan  I see no lense flare lol. I think you just meant the lighting is too bright. I was going to say that too, but the rest of the image works with it so I didn't really mind. | yea there is no lens flare. And i made this at school so it was all default settings. I got an A 
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Originally Posted by TuNice™ yea there is no lens flare. And i made this at school so it was all default settings. I got an A | I can't wait til next year so I can start taking graphic design classes. You just in graphic design 1? | |
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Originally Posted by TuNice™ yea there is no lens flare. And i made this at school so it was all default settings. I got an A | what smudge settings did you use? They are sexy
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03-09-2008
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Fuck you guys =(
You know what I meant.
making me feel stupid and what not =,( | |
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